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When Talking Isn't Enough by *DeadSoulMate:iconDeadSoulMate:



Sometimes I wish I could touch you and feel you, know you’re tangible beside me.
Sometimes I wish I could taste your skin, drink you in and shudder at the luxury.
Sometimes I wish I could feel your smile against my neck, in hope that your happiness would rub off on me.
Sometimes I wish I could smell you, so I could recognise your scent and smile as it clings to me.
Sometimes I wish I could believe that this could be possible.
©2009 *DeadSoulMate
:icondeadsoulmate:

Author's Comments

I caved.

I've not submitted writing in ages, so I saw this and caved.

I don't want to talk about it too much (spoilers?) but it's from the viewpoint of a character in a story I am supposed to be writing. I wonder what you think of it...

Written in less than five minutes, but I really like it.

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:iconkristinerose:
it is quite nice.
i wonder who this character is
gotta love that feeling of longing in a character.

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92% of teens would be dead if Abercrombie&Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe. Put this in your sig if you are among the 8% who would be laughing.
:iconjo123abc:
Wow that was good, I can't write, I wish I could. Oh well If we all could write well the world would be a boring place (said in an effort to comfort myself lol).

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I don't exercise... If god wanted me to bend over he would have put diamonds on the floor!!!
:icondeadsoulmate:
:D Thank you!!

And I see your point. :P It's like me and drawing.

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Conversation is amazing when we're free to say things people often won't because they hate themselves...
:icondeadsoulmate:
If all goes well, you shall find out who he is. :)

And thanks.

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Conversation is amazing when we're free to say things people often won't because they hate themselves...
:iconjo123abc:
:)

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I don't exercise... If god wanted me to bend over he would have put diamonds on the floor!!!
:iconkristinerose:
oooooh I can't wait.
I look forward to it.

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92% of teens would be dead if Abercrombie&Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe. Put this in your sig if you are among the 8% who would be laughing.

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